There Was Something In The Air That Night!

Valentine, Love, Romance, Silhouette, Couple

There was something in the air that night

The silence amplified every sound

He touched my hand, a spark shot through me

He drew me close, then span me around

Two smitten hearts were struck with lighting

That look of passion deep in his eyes

Declaring he was yearning for me

Breathless as my pulse began to rise

In his strong arms I felt so alive

He led me on quite a merry dance

Had me magnetised right to his side

Electric charging a sweet romance

This was in response to THE ELEMENTAL CHALLENGE hosted by Teresa aka The Haunted Wordsmith:

15 thoughts on “There Was Something In The Air That Night!”

Wow! How romantic.

crushedcaramel says:

Apr 6, 2019 at 9:45 am

lol! I had the idea of trying to write about the excitement when the spark of attraction is obvious…I got a bit too wrapped up in counting syllables and trying to use rhyme – it’s not what I hoped, but I just didn’t have time to do anything more to it.

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1. Sadje says:
  
  Apr 6, 2019 at 10:58 am
  
  It’s very good.
  
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You can feel the tingly sensation in the words!

crushedcaramel says:

Apr 6, 2019 at 9:46 am

And that is a word I was trying to find a way to use! It was all about the tingles of attraction, but I couldn’t tingling into any of the lines.

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1. The Eclectic Contrarian says:
  
  Apr 6, 2019 at 12:53 pm
  
  I’m in the middle of a poem right now… I call these things word locked… because I can feel the direction and the way it’s supposed to go, but the words aren’t cooperating..
  
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