
Please don’t examine me so closely
Please don’t analyse my every shade
In the stark light of this cold world
Devoid of warmth and colour
Take a few steps back if you will know me at all.
View me in the context of my family
Together we are a vibrant shot of life
A pretty and kindly haven of joy

Look at me in the greater scheme of things
How I interact in my world of friends
How I bloom even during dark days
Dancing with glee in the kaleidoscope I play in

View me as a tiny yet wonderful ingredient
In this grand and splendid universe of delight
I am only who I am due to a lifetime of others
Who’ve coloured every moment of my existence
My homage to all who have made me “me” and made me happy to be me
Lovely poem.
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Really lovely poem and perspective. Something to really think about.
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Thank you…
…I had an idea, and although I have not had time to polish it (I am still at work counting the hours until finishing time) I was just hoping that it was kind of obvious what I was trying to say.
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I hear that. 😀. I think you nailed it. Sometimes it’s good to just put the pure thought out. Imperfect in your eyes or not.
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I will now think of you as an ingredient in the universe of delight. Wonderful poem.
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Thank you 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Such a beautiful poem! Love the match-up with such peaceful images too! 😀
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Thank you… I hoped the images would help the idea along.
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Beautiful! 💜
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Thank you…
…I keep looking at this wondering of it needs some work. I did it during my break-time, and it was very hurried and higgledy-piggledy. But I like Amy Westphal’s comment…so I am going to hold off editing it at the moment.
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I read it again and I love it as is! You are a gifted writer. 😊 I wish I could write something of that caliber during my break! Hold off editing for sure.
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I am very rarely creative…but I had an idea…
I saw the picture prompt and thought the photo of the water-lilly, although colourful, just looked a bit stark close-up and the background seemed rather grim. As soon as I think water-lilly I think of Monet. And then I thought of how if someone starts to analyse us on our own, close-up, we don’t always appear great, but if they get to see us in our setting, how we fit in with our family, friends and community and the wider world….then they will get a much better picture of who we are.
In all honesty, it was prompted because of a new-ish friend of mine, who seems to think he knows me (I think he is counting the days until Goldfinch leaves) and I have been a bit reluctant with the whole situation. I almost found myself arguing with him recently that he cannot possibly know me because he has not met my family and friends. He had beein paying me compliments which I feel very awkward about, so I told him I am only who I am because of everyone that has made me “me” and so any compliments belong to my wonderful world of family and friends.
I have been finding it difficult because I am devoted to Goldfinch, which he knows, and I am really uncomfortable with some of the things he has been saying to me.
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It is very deep…complex, yet simple at the same time. That’s just my take. I love it! Keep us posted on your new friend. Sounds like he may be an interesting contrast to Goldfinch. 🤔
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Lovely poem ☺
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Thank you Atara!
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This poem is lovely, Mel. I love the concept.
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Thank you Roberta ❤
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Love it!!
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❤ Thanks Sophie ❤
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The pairing of this poem and the painting images works so well together
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Thank you ❤
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Beautiful!
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❤ Thank you Dorothy ❤
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Nicely done!
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